Spreads: page 2--too much spacing in the center. Maybe make the quote darker or in color and move the text box up a little. If you try color quotes, use them in the whole document, including his name. page 3--same problem in the center; move the drawings up a little so there is less space in the center and a bigger break between the drawings and the citations. Table of Contents: it is a little difficult to follow with the names on one page and the page numbers on the other. Try putting them both on the right and eliminate the circles on that page. The cover looks sophisticated--nice layout-- but the Saul Bass arm distracts from that effect. He isn't your designer, so I would consider eliminating it. Also it doesn't work well with the geometric design on the inside--maybe you could include a geometric image on the cover.
Spreads: page 2--too much spacing in the center. Maybe make the quote darker or in color and move the text box up a little. If you try color quotes, use them in the whole document, including his name.
ReplyDeletepage 3--same problem in the center; move the drawings up a little so there is less space in the center and a bigger break between the drawings and the citations.
Table of Contents: it is a little difficult to follow with the names on one page and the page numbers on the other. Try putting them both on the right and eliminate the circles on that page.
The cover looks sophisticated--nice layout-- but the Saul Bass arm distracts from that effect. He isn't your designer, so I would consider eliminating it. Also it doesn't work well with the geometric design on the inside--maybe you could include a geometric image on the cover.