FLWright is such a geometric designer that I think you should justify your columns to make the layout as clean as his designs. Pay attention to the grid and have the columns and photos line up on page 1 & 4. Page two needs columns. Think more about your paragraph breaks. A space between paragraphs might make the text seem less overwhelming. If you decide to indent, do it on all the paragraphs. Your font seems big, but maybe that is because of the overall book size? You can go down to 8.5 font size. That would give you more breathing room on the pages.
The pages look good and the images are nice, especially the drawings. I just looked again and it seems like the margins on top and bottom could be smaller. I'm getting nit-picky here, but better now than later. Consider that the pages open up so you see two pages at once. The first two pages would have the photo and drawings all lined up across the bottom. Have you tried either the photo at the top of its page or the drawings above the quote?
FLWright is such a geometric designer that I think you should justify your columns to make the layout as clean as his designs. Pay attention to the grid and have the columns and photos line up on page 1 & 4. Page two needs columns. Think more about your paragraph breaks. A space between paragraphs might make the text seem less overwhelming. If you decide to indent, do it on all the paragraphs. Your font seems big, but maybe that is because of the overall book size? You can go down to 8.5 font size. That would give you more breathing room on the pages.
ReplyDeleteThe pages look good and the images are nice, especially the drawings. I just looked again and it seems like the margins on top and bottom could be smaller. I'm getting nit-picky here, but better now than later. Consider that the pages open up so you see two pages at once. The first two pages would have the photo and drawings all lined up across the bottom. Have you tried either the photo at the top of its page or the drawings above the quote?
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